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Nepenthe
Contributed by
Blaze
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Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 04:17:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When mind muses beyond these meager strands
And its spacious brine, cradled by sands,
Beyond waters’ blush, as sun sparks ocean,
As a saffron trail marks their devotion;
When spirit’s stress combusts on collision,
And singes veiled by bliss I envision,
With the celestial beacon, as a pyre;
My feath’ry soul transcends even higher.
It soars to new scapes, with a needle’s knot,
Those heather-like scenes, through young rain it trots –
In reverie, I gaze through distant lands;
My troubles showered from these meager strands.
Copyright ©
Blaze
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2003-12-29 16:17:04]
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Re: Nepenthe
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by jme on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:04:21 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. Well done. |
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Re: Nepenthe
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 09:56:56 PM AEST
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Really good! If you'va only written five, the world of poetry has been depvived of an awefull lot of good poetry.
Keep writing.
David Lossing |
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Re: Nepenthe
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by Blaze on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 10:18:41 PM AEST
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| Thank you. :-) |
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Re: Nepenthe
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:30:12 AM AEST
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| Fìad' aur-bèodra! Very good! I like the fact that you pay attention to alliteration as well as rhyme. Write more! |
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