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My Beautiful Tomorrow
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 04:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I'm losing my mind
I need to scream
But everything I have to say
Would only make you push me far away
I'm losing it now
I need to run
But I have nowhere to go to
I'd only end up coming back to you
I'm losing my heart
I want to stop
But then I'd never get the chance
To know the feeling of a lovers' dance
I'm losing my will
I want to quit
But if I did I'd never know
If I'll have a beautiful tomorrow
You make me hurt and
You make me cry but
That's okay
You put me down and
You break my heart but
That's okay
'Cause you show me beauty
And you keep me safe
And all the goodness in my life
It's all from you
It's what you do
You always make everything okay
You are my disease
But you're my cure
If I could break out of my head
Maybe I could forgive the things you said
You are the reason
But you're the end
If I could get around my heart
Maybe the world would stop falling apart
You make me yell and
You make me hate but
That's okay
You make it hard and
You frustrate me but
That's okay
'Cause for me you're perfect
You make me complete
All the sanity in my life
Is 'cause of you
And all you do
You always make everything okay
I'm losing my mind
I'm giving up
I guess I'll never know
My beautiful tomorrow
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-12-29 16:16:16]
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Re: My Beautiful Tomorrow
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:28:36 PM AEST
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They say tomorrow never comes
but they're wrong
tomorrow was yesterday
bob |
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Re: My Beautiful Tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:43:38 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem! |
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Re: My Beautiful Tomorrow
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:57:48 PM AEST
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| And yesterday seems so long ago... I loved this. Reminds me of something I've had mulling in my head for the past week and it still hasn't fully taken form yet.... Don't give up hon. I think you are doing great. |
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Re: My Beautiful Tomorrow
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:49:39 AM AEST
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this is beautiful.. i love the flow of the words, the subtle rhyme scheme, aww i love all of it!
charlotte x_x_x |
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