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Awaken
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:31:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your feelings I detest
it's just making my life more a mess
I'm gonna run
i'm gonna hide away
No one will find me
I'm going blindly
I cry inside
nothings hre but whats my own
on this weary road of emptiness again I go
Will I ever awake from tis crazy state ?
Should I just keep running far far away?
I'm drunk off of nothing
and I still imagine your face
Dammit! I just want out of this place
JENNA
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Re: Awaken
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:47:07 PM AEST
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glad you are feeling better now and
i know the feelings good write
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Re: Awaken
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:47:56 PM AEST
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| Hard to get some people out of your head but great once you finaly do. Keep it up. I liked the idea behind being drunk off of nothing... |
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Re: Awaken
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:56:26 PM AEST
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Good decision. We all carry scars but after a while they don't hurt anymore.
Try my poem "The way we were"
bob |
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Re: Awaken
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by hope on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 02:24:38 AM AEST
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| very good write...i enjoy your style. You can feel the frustration of life in this....."weary road of emptiness" |
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Re: Awaken
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by Sinned on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 08:24:27 AM AEST
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Well said
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