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Let go
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:22:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Let him go
Let it be
its time to set him free
his mind is somewhere else,
somewhere other than with you
His heart is numb
numbto you
his soul is a missing piece of himself
and you cannot fulfill it
JENNA
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2003-12-29 13:22:34]
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Re: Let go
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:44:09 PM AEST
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Wow Jenna... This was deeply awesome to me. I loved the words but this sorta struck home...
'His heart is numb
numbto you
his soul is a missing piece of himself
and you cannot fulfill it'
I loved those lines.
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Re: Let go
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 02:08:04 PM AEST
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I sort of warm to your short sharp poems.
Everything said nothing wasted.
A pleasant change.
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