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Masquerade
Contributed by
estelle_toh
on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 08:02:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Encompassed by beings,
Overwhelmed by loneliness,
Emotionally untouched.
Blending in with happy faces,
I painted a mask of blissfulness.
Beneath my masquerade,
Is a sea of melancholic currents.
Tormented by waves of depression,
Nauseous,
I faltered.
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estelle_toh
... [
2003-12-29 08:02:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Masquerade
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 12:32:41 PM AEST (User
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On a scale of 1 to 5, I give you a 10. This told of the torment to perfection my friend. Few words that carried deep meaning.
Very well done.
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Re: Masquerade
(User Rating: 1 ) by jme on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:30:41 PM AEST (User
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Great write. I enjoyed it very much. |
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