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Reality
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 06:24:25 AM in AEST
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Deep within a lost city of Matter
Upon a realm once forgotten
Demons plague the thoughts of millions
As the surface begins to hotten
Falling Clouds of thunders wraith
A mirror of Yester-year
Raging Angels of lonely truth
Living my life is unconditional fear
Screaming silences of crimson red
Within a vortex of unleashed compassion
Surging tremors of unfelt pain
Flowing with a timeless fashion
Up becomes down and down becomes humanity
The truth but a whisper within all
Inner demons possess the power of one
And ask when this became your reality.
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forever_lonely
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2003-12-29 06:24:25]
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Re: Reality
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 07:12:28 AM AEST
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Can't sum this up with words...this sounds and feels all too familiar to me. Glad you decided to re-post it, I missed it before (my loss, for sure). "Vitreous Soul, this is your life..."
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Re: Reality
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:39:18 PM AEST
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very good...I like it a lot...
Jamie |
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