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Heart in Your hands
Contributed by
stalkee
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Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:34:02 AM in AEST
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I'd put my heart in your hands,
and what you could do, I understand
You could pierce it with an arrow,
I know you could, know you would make it so
But it'd be worth the pain since,
this terrible screaming silence
between us, hurts me more than an arrow can
So...I put my heart in your hands
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stalkee
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2003-12-29 01:34:02]
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Re: Heart in Your hands
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by venkat on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:44:02 AM AEST
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| poem depicts a particular state of mind..good piece .. venkat |
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Re: Heart in Your hands
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by ravenrain on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 02:38:12 AM AEST
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| It's good...I complete understand you're pain...I've been there myself! |
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Re: Heart in Your hands
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by Chanti on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 02:56:22 AM AEST
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| Great write... ive been in this type of situation before |
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Re: Heart in Your hands
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 03:52:27 AM AEST
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| putting ones heart into ones hands is asking for anything.are you willing to find out.....Place your heart into the one who created you and see what HE what HE can do for you....nice write ...sandy |
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Re: Heart in Your hands
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by Candi on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:36:58 AM AEST
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i love your raw style and sense of reality. you're blunt and to the point. no beating around the bush here. and thats the best way to be...... true... to yourself and others. great write. i look forward to more of your work.
candi |
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Re: Heart in Your hands
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by eternal_sorrows on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:00:58 AM AEST
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Heart in your hands!! I love it!
es |
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