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-:- Through These Eyes -:-

Contributed by Crimson_Rose on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:26:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Through these deep cerulean eyes I see,
I see, a storm of hate & disbelief
A rugged hall of evil beings fume around me
Vast depression and isolation swirl in a cloud of smoke
Choking my soul, ripping to get out

The razor sharp claws of sin, terribly swing at me
Ruby red blood flows from my weak body,
Making a puddle of absolute evil
I bathe my hands in the silky blood
The blood alone stains my delicate hands

I see it, before me,
I see, a pit of vile spears
My inner voice, wanting me to jump in
I take a light step forward
My foot making a light noise

I fall into a black, infinite abyss
Falling for all eternity
Satanic darkness takes over me
The darkness, pulsing through my veins
Forever capturing me in pain & torment

Copyright © Crimson_Rose ... [ 2003-12-28 21:26:38]
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Re: -:- Through These Eyes -:- (User Rating: 1 )
by Candi on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:51:02 AM AEST
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good write. very blunt and forward. i look forward to more of your work.

candi

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