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Express Delivery To Nowhere
Contributed by
carebear
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Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:02:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lock me in a box
Throw away the key put me
in a corner so none sees me
Bleed I'll hide away forever away
From all the shame the fear of my
Own guilt I'd reather keep away I
Don't belong here I need to stop
The cutting my scars won't go
Away my world won't change just
Leave me in this box I'll slowly
Decay from my skin, my bones will
Break apart little by little my heart
Will fade away like a ghost unseen
Leave me alone in my corner my
Box I want to stay.
©CareBear
Copyright ©
carebear
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2003-12-28 21:02:20]
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Re: Express Delivery To Nowhere
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:26:37 PM AEST
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| What can people say about this poem....personally i think you could work on phrasing your sentences together just a little bit. but other than that your a good writer. |
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Re: Express Delivery To Nowhere
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:27:07 PM AEST
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yer right I do like this... It was cool how all the lines were broken up intermittenly thats always funky. 'fear of my own guilt' I loved that.
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