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Contagious
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:02:58 PM in AEST
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Your softests lips
and gentlest hands
lead me to my sin.
Lay you down
our lips embrace
and stars weep.
Never could have
have enough to satisfy.
Pull me in and
deeply come to you.
Whenever we have
started we have
never let it go.
Nails in my back
they deeply tantalize.
My hands have
gone again to
explore your body.
All over us
candle light kisses.
Heaven dies and
gently weeps
each time we
come as one.
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-12-28 13:02:58]
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Re: Contagious
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:04:43 PM AEST
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I think its writing like this that leads to sin. I love it
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Re: Contagious
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by Merry on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:09:50 PM AEST
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must go jump in snow bank to cool off - hot stuff for a winter afternoon
nicely done
merry |
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Re: Contagious
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:10:03 PM AEST
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| Are you dating again ? hehehe.....sounds gooooooooooooood.....have fun hehehe.....sandy and the poem was great.... |
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Re: Contagious
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:43:00 PM AEST
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| woaaaaaaa.....sounds like you had a good time =) great write! |
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Re: Contagious
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:00:17 PM AEST
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Aha Paul.... This was refreshing!!! Great write..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Contagious
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:33:20 PM AEST
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Breathtakingly beautiful, softly erotic, wow!! excellent write!
Larry |
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Re: Contagious
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 07:31:28 PM AEST
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| i like it... ;) |
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Re: Contagious
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:09:06 PM AEST
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This is just a lovely poem, and so romantic. It's normal...nothing wrong wih that...but when one can put it into words...that's exquisite dellight!
I love the part where you said "Heaven dies and gently weeps...pretty deep!
Loved it.
ConSue |
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Re: Contagious
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:10:51 PM AEST
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This was beautiful one of your best surely. I must ask a few questions where did u find this girl and does she have a younger sister? This was brilliant.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Contagious
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by Candi on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 10:47:39 PM AEST
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this poem has passion dripping from every word! great write. i will absolutely be reading more of your work.
candi |
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Re: Contagious
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by jaeann on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 12:16:56 AM AEST
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| they deeply tantalize.......my my...yes!!!! |
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Re: Contagious
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 12:56:33 AM AEST
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"Heaven dies and gently weeps
each time we come as one"...
mmm..that is poetry...welldone :)
venkat
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Re: Contagious
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:11:31 AM AEST
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That's SO sweet and beautiful... stop it, you're putting thoughts in my head again!! :P Great write, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very, very thoroughly. Hehe.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Contagious
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:49:33 PM AEST
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let me just add to the long list of props
excellent
michelle |
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Re: Contagious
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by jme on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:24:14 PM AEST
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| You are very talented. Beautifully written. |
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Re: Contagious
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:26:58 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. I enjoyed this alot.. Props to ya ... I like your style of writing
peace
JENNA |
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Re: Contagious
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:01:14 AM AEST
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Only have one thing to say about this poem, absolutley breathtakingly beautiful.
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Contagious
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:02:04 PM AEST
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i need to go see my boyfriend now!..lol i loved the poem,very romantic^_^
luv always |
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