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Like A Rose
Contributed by
estelle_toh
on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 12:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Like a rose in spring,
From an uncertain rosebud
To a darling rose,
Our friendship blossomed silently.
Like a rose in the spring,
Basking in the sunshine,
Dancing in the breeze,
Our friendship flourished.
Like a rose in the spring,
Tasting the tears of May,
Touched by the heavy sighs of nature,
Our friendship is unwavered.
Like a rose in the spring,
A silent beauty firmly rooted in sweet earth,
Nurtured by elements of the capricious Mother Nature.
Thriving under the brilliant sun,
Our bond deepened.
Emerging stronger after a rainfall,
Our ties strengthened.
This is my wish for our friendship to be,
For eternity.
Copyright ©
estelle_toh
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2003-12-28 12:23:22]
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Re: Like A Rose
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 12:34:19 PM AEST
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| Very good write. I loved your comparison to a rose. |
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Re: Like A Rose
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:43:10 PM AEST
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Heartfelt and beautiful!
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Like A Rose
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 03:27:26 PM AEST
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How wonderful to be compared to as a rose
Great poem
Wonderful words
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Like A Rose
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 02:54:20 PM AEST
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| This was a very unique style. Much like a whispering breeze where your words... Good write. |
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