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Apparently
Contributed by
Coquillion
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Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 10:00:24 AM in AEST
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The man I always thought I was
never came to be …….. apparently
All the wondrous things I’ve seen
I really did not see …….. apparently
My spirit, that soared in azure skies,
was never ever free …….. apparently
The wondrous world in which I lived
was naught but fantasy …….. apparently
And now you free me from delusions
And you do what is best for me ………apparently
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Coquillion
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2003-12-28 10:00:24]
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Re: Apparently
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by MisterRight on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 10:25:04 AM AEST
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umm, all I can really think to say is WOW!
Curtis |
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Re: Apparently
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 12:37:36 PM AEST
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| Dont they ever stop to think that our world is sometimes better than their world? Great write |
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Re: Apparently
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 02:51:33 PM AEST
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| In my own twisted way this was humorous to me. Don't take offense to that though. It was a very good write. It just made me relate to it on a very deep and personal level. |
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