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Insignificant In Death
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 03:51:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A shattered cry
Emanating through moonless sky
Never being heard
Are any of the sorrowed words
Without significance
Without so much as a chance
An ill-fated dream
A tortured, echoed scream
Rising somnolence
Crippling futile existence
A love with no worth
Alone in this tomb called Earth
Destined for solitude
No more will to change the mood
It's become too tough
What I offer will never be enough
'To those I leave behind, my friends, know that I love you all. But please, don't cry for me in death. You should have cried for me in life. A life of loneliness is no life at all, as an existence of solitude is one that will die along with the bearer. I have spent every ounce of effort allotted my heart, and regretfully it has fallen short. So I leave you a shell, an enervated soul, a shattered heart. Please, just remember me for what I could never be.'
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Re: Insignificant In Death
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 03:58:18 AM AEST
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Dan?
This sounds a little stupid, but are you serious about what you said here? I mean, was this just figurative musings (we all do them) or do you really plan to?
If not, or if so, a beautiful poem here.
If so . . . God, I hope not. I wouldn't try and guilt you into prolonging the pain, but . . .
Well, just know I'd miss your writing, your personality, and your you-ness. If you need to talk about anything whatsoever, I can't promise to help, or even understand. But I romise to listed, if that's what you need.
--Nora |
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Re: Insignificant In Death
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 04:05:04 AM AEST
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Sorry, typoes. What I meant to say was "promise to listen".
My thoughts, hopes, and vague prayers are with you.
--Nora |
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Re: Insignificant In Death
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:00:37 AM AEST
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"A life of loneliness is no life at all" - Yes!!! Good write...I feel it deeply. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: Insignificant In Death
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by venkat on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:20:59 AM AEST
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Heart captivating write..as you love us we too love you..my dear V.S..I hope every thing will be right very soon..pl. take care of you.
venkat |
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Re: Insignificant In Death
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by dumfries on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:20:05 AM AEST
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| Absolutely soul searching. that was a good read. |
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Re: Insignificant In Death
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:51:11 AM AEST
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| Very nice write. Touched me quite a bit. |
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Re: Insignificant In Death
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:30:55 PM AEST
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Like all great poems they produce something special, and this like all other great poems,did,
A friend amongst strangers, to the writer, your talent is by far the best i have seen in years and you write with such feeling its soul searching, if your comments are true to this poem.. then dont.. the world could use someone with the talent that you have, look to the friend amongst strangers in the comments she is one in a milion |
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