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bloody pieces of my broken heart
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 03:27:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i wish i could tell you how sorry i am
for everything that i have done
i wish that you could hear the pain in my voice
as i scream this into the night
just want things to be
like they were before
before you saw the boy that i am
before you stopped pretending to love me
i wish that you would take my calls
i wish you'd just give me five minutes of your time
i wish that i could make myself hate you
i wish i didn't need you so ******* bad
talking to your pictures
that's all you left behind
besides the ghost of a broken heart
a heart that is no longer mine
i wish my world didn't revolve around you
i wish i hadn't loved you so much
i wish it was your fingers caressing my lips
instead of this gun's uncaring touch
paint the stars with the back of my head
it sounds brutal but it's the only choice that i have
the sky will weep my wasted blood
and i will wake alone no more
(you were everything
you were MY EVERYTHING
and you made me your nothing
your pet for play and pain
you tired of me
and left me to make love to your ghost
you left me to descend
into the pit where my heart used to be)
this isn't a poem
this is a curse
this is the mantra that i will repeat
even as the hollow point takes my cranial virginity
i hope that everything you love disappears
i hope that everyone that you hold dear
leaves you, cold and alone
i wish that, for one second,
you could feel the pain you left me to die in
and i hope that in the end
when everyone you love
when everything you hold dear is gone
i hope that all you have left
are the bloody pieces of my broken heart
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-12-28 03:27:26]
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Re: bloody pieces of my broken heart
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:03:39 AM AEST
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Whoah harsh...but I definately liked the write.
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Re: bloody pieces of my broken heart
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 06:49:01 PM AEST
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| my cranial virginity......they know not what they put us through............very disturbingly hurtful rant..........maybe they will know someday...... |
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Re: bloody pieces of my broken heart
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 07:27:12 PM AEST
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Dude u show your brilliance in this bloody work of art here. This was awesome and so heart-felt and littered with pain and your talent that I wish I could have one ounce of. A beautiful poem... but I'll shut up and go read it again.
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Re: bloody pieces of my broken heart
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by stitches on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 09:46:12 AM AEST
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| pretty... does this "scrawl" have an origin, if so plase elaborate. |
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Re: bloody pieces of my broken heart
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by deadly_blaZe on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 02:19:36 PM AEST
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holy *****.. this was amazing...brutally captivating
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Re: bloody pieces of my broken heart
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 02:55:10 PM AEST
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| ***** a man cancer... I think that opened my eyes wider than they have been in a while... I'm totally torn between this one and zero to zero... |
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