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Never To Love Again
Contributed by
carebear
on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 03:08:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Today I sit in the window seat
Listing to the sound of rain playing
A heartbreaking aching song trying to hold
Back my tears that dont belong
Doing what I can to find the remains
Of my run over heart that has been
Hit from the very start.
Closing my eyes the pain drinking me up
Falling down in to a dark world why
I ask where did we go wrong? I
Open my eyes still nothing has changed
Why was love created in the first place?
It's only going to hurt me once more
For I was to blind to see.
Love orders me to hurt for all eternity
Never to love again forever.
©carebear
Copyright ©
carebear
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2003-12-28 03:08:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Never To Love Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:22:00 AM AEST (User
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Such a sad thing to go through and to write about. Nice write. All the best.
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Re: Never To Love Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:40:17 AM AEST (User
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Heart wrenching to say the least. Good write. |
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Re: Never To Love Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Estelle_Toh on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 12:27:06 PM AEST (User
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very melancholic very nice..
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Re: Never To Love Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 07:36:22 PM AEST (User
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this was heartbreaking more so because you write of a place that I have been intimate with for far to long. I wish I could give u a hug and say thnx for sharing this, but your to far away.
Bobo (Joel) |
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