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bloodshot
Contributed by
a_t0rtured_s0ul
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Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:15:27 AM in AEST
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Went to bed with uncomforted cries,
Rubbing my sleepless bloodshot eyes.
Yearning for him to comfort me,
Wondering how empty life has to be.
Remembering the good times we once had,
Still I go to bed upset and mad.
Deserving to be treated right,
Willing to put up a fight.
Wishing for him to be the man he once was,
More than anyone else does.
He used to be sensitive, caring and kind,
That's the old him he needs to find.
Once so bold,
His eyes now empty and cold.
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Re: bloodshot
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:12:37 AM AEST
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Oh sad. Good write. People change though and sometimes not for the better...so sad...all the best for you.
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Re: bloodshot
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 12:20:36 PM AEST
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This is nicely written, but so very sad... hope things get better..
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