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C'est la vie
Contributed by
Jeff9man
on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:12:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Please forgive me,
I did not know.
I never would have imagined
A rope so rough,
A blade so sharp.
I don’t care who can see,
The pain I keep inside of me.
I won’t hide it anymore
My wounded soul,
Battered and sore.
You always said He had a plan,
How can I agree, a broken man?
Life’s His gift, I’ll give it back.
Tired of my world doused in black.
Sorry I let you down,
Just not strong enough
I know it doesn’t seem fair,
But that’s life, tough.
Copyright ©
Jeff9man
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2003-12-28 02:12:37]
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Re: C'est la vie
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:35:42 AM AEST
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Thats what I do, but others take it wrong..writing helps release what's held within..everyone knows that..
Nicely done.
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Re: C'est la vie
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by Chanti on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:46:48 AM AEST
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Beautifully written...
"You always said He had a plan,
How can I agree, a broken man?
Life’s His gift, I’ll give it back.
Tired of my world doused in black."
I loved those lines. |
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Re: C'est la vie
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 03:25:56 AM AEST
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I love it, i'm feeling every word of it right now...
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: C'est la vie
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:27:44 AM AEST
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Wow excellent write.
"Life's his gift I will give it back" - What a thought...I like it...you whole write captured how I feel...thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: C'est la vie
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by SuicidalSon on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:30:44 AM AEST
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You'd be amazed how many people on this site take everything people like us write so seriously, even though its still just poetry
people can't grasp that these types of thoughts we try to share no matter how good the write |
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Re: C'est la vie
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:02:51 AM AEST
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At last I am beginning to understand the "Suicide Souls Society" not just from this poem but also the comments.
In the past I have tended to be unsympathetic
(even contemptuous).
I'm going to go away and have a long think.
Maybe I'll even change my ideas and write a sympathetic poem
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Re: C'est la vie
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by Jeff9Man on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:59:22 AM AEST
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wow, I really don't know what to say. never thought that anything i wrote would be a factor in how someone thinks. thanks for reading, and i also thank everyone who posted. i really do appreciate it,
Jeff |
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Re: C'est la vie
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:01:54 AM AEST
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| Awesome write ... have read this many times ... words so simple, yet full of meaning, full of emotion ... perfect, striking me somewhere right between the eyes ... Jan |
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Re: C'est la vie
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by allie_07 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 07:16:17 PM AEST
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| very powerful. i love it! |
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Re: C'est la vie
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by allie_07 on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 02:54:17 PM AEST
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| outstanding write |
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