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Reality
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 10:18:07 PM in AEST
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Deep within a lost city of Matter
Upon a realm once forgotten
Demons plague the thoughts of millions
As the surface begins to hotten
Falling Clouds of thunders wraith
A mirror of Yester-year
Raging Angels of lonely truth
Living my life is unconditional fear
Screaming silences of crimson red
Within a vortex of unleashed compassion
Surging tremors of unfelt pain
Flowing with a timeless fashion
Up becomes down and down becomes humanity
The truth but a whisper within all
Inner demons possess the power of one
And ask when this became your reality.
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2003-12-27 22:18:07]
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Re: Reality
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 10:40:19 PM AEST
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Chilling... it's a scary thought coz it's true. That is reality, at least for some people, me included. Great descriptions... it's almost too wordy, but not quite. Really great write, I had to read it twice. :)
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Re: Reality
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by Wildcard1506 on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 10:40:43 PM AEST
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| This is good. Those who don't understand it will think it's garbage, if they do, then don't listen, b/c your talent is indescribable |
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Re: Reality
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by full_blur on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:38:56 PM AEST
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| chaotic brilliance! Deep and moving at the same time. I think I need to read this one a few times to really grasp it. |
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Re: Reality
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:12:47 PM AEST
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| not bad |
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Re: Reality
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 05:15:18 PM AEST
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| mirror of oblivion would have worked better i think, but very good all the same, great descriptive language |
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Re: Reality
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by Sonibe on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 04:22:02 PM AEST
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....Bravo, bravo....rather chilling too, that's why I like it....
~D30~ |
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Re: Reality
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by jme on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 04:51:36 PM AEST
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| Great expression of your mind. |
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Re: Reality
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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| It is an interesting write. |
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Re: Reality
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 08:52:50 PM AEST
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a vivid picture of the torment of depression
Well written
Shari |
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