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As My Will Abides
Contributed by
Elf
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Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 05:57:35 PM in AEST
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My anger's flaring, quickly rising.
Jumping up to heights surprising.
I strive to hide it, not to release.
But I'm coming close to the end of my leash.
I can't take much more, I'm all fed up.
With one move, the end will be abrupt.
Though it be; they'll walk away.
But never to forget the day.
That time they pushed me a bit too far.
When my back hit the bar.
They knew what they would create;
Thought it was something they could take.
But I'll take no more, this all must cease.
I need to rest; need the peace.
Into the seclusion, as my will abides.
My anger dims again as I hide.
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Elf
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2003-12-27 17:57:35]
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Re: As My Will Abides
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 07:39:49 PM AEST
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Well done!
Larry |
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Re: As My Will Abides
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 07:25:51 PM AEST
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| Very emotional. And the rhyme is very nice (its so rare these days). Keep it up |
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Re: As My Will Abides
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 07:25:53 PM AEST
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| Very emotional. And the rhyme is very nice (its so rare these days). Keep it up |
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Re: As My Will Abides
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 07:26:29 PM AEST
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| Very emotional. And the rhyme is very nice (its so rare these days). Keep it up |
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Re: As My Will Abides
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 07:27:50 PM AEST
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| ...Oh, and sorry for that repetition! |
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