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I Divine Days
Contributed by
Blaze
on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:15:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I divine days when this mitt may caress you;
As the haze gushes feathery flakes,
As flurries sheet elegant tress of citrine hue,
As your charming hymns transcend wintry lakes,
Your radiant eyes kindle the pale, frosty air;
Their amber waves cloak the lurid pier –
The dock’s outermost, foggy reaches – mute; no blare,
Accent your moonlit self, crystal clear.
I divine days when these fingers brush your curls –
Those heavenly, fine clusters of hair;
Dazzling summer strands, and tainted December pearls –
To gaze again at your eyes’ tawny glare.
Maiden, your brilliant pose sets my world agleam;
You, I approach, but why tread away?
Your glow turns to shadow, from light to dark – a dream?
The snow welcomes rain, as white sires gray.
A single rose held, I kneel down on damp ground,
The downpour drenches many a tear;
I stare at the grave décor – no life can be found;
No grass, stiff trees – my fate – this drab frontier.
The moon, full, still is shining; not raved.
No maiden found of light-brown eyes and hair citrine;
I place the one dying rose by a slate, engraved,
“Here lies our beloved Madeline.”
I divine days when I may touch you – again.
Copyright ©
Blaze
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2003-12-27 16:15:38]
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Re: I Divine Days
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 05:56:06 PM AEST
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| Very stunning work for a beginner, this is fantastic, keep up the great work and hope to read more from you, take care Val |
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Re: I Divine Days
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 09:21:01 PM AEST
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| *agrees with Val* very nice work here. I want MORE! =) |
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Re: I Divine Days
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by krazed_AnGeL101 on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 09:24:23 PM AEST
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That was great for a beginner. Keep writing. I'll be looking for them.
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