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Fray
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 02:32:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I learned to walk through life myself
But you chose to walk the other way
When I was lost, your hand I held
But I chose to look the other way
I learned to hide inside my mind
To hide from the way you make me feel
But I can't blame you for what's mine
All the things my anger does reveal
So I sit here in my quiet corner
Far from you and the things you do
Masking the scars of my reality
They're from you and the things you do
I'm here 'cause I've got nowhere else to go
So I fray from the things you say
But when everything you know comes apart
Throw away all the things they say
I don't give a **** what they think
I'm not afraid, but I'm not quite brave
And I'm teetering on the brink
I won't forget everything you gave
It must be hell to live with me
I do know the things you say are true
I'm sure I'll learn eventually
'Cause despite how it seems, I love you
It's only 'cause I never really grew
I concreal what I really feel
It's only 'cause there's too much in my head
Can't tell you how I really deal
It's only 'cause I hate to say you're right
How I act is all that I lack
It's only because this is who I am
On my back hiding in the cracks
I only want to disappear
Close my eyes and just never wake up
I'm sick and tired of being here
I'm drowning, I just wanna give up
So I lay here hiding inside my mind
Blaming you for the hurt that's mine
Masking the scars of my reality
'Cause through them, my pain does reveal
Because of you, my edges are fraying
And all life's colours are graying
So now I choose to look the other way
Throw away everything you say
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-12-27 14:32:22]
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Re: Fray
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by shelby on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 02:43:00 PM AEST
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these words are so powerful yet sad at the same time. Well done and so expressive. If you need to talk pm me anytime. My new email is desertpoet35@hotmail.com
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Re: Fray
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 03:46:39 PM AEST
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Powerful....well done.
Hope your Christmas was good,,
Jenni |
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Re: Fray
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by forever_lonely on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 06:59:20 PM AEST
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wow.. i really really felt this i can see you love staind just as much as i do maybe even more and you truely feel the words in their songs how they are supposed to, your poem touches emotions some only dream of getting close to a really great write well done.... ........Sometimes when your out of rope, the way to climb back up is unclear the walls you build around yourself, i guess they also keep you here. are you afraid of what they think?, whoever they happen to be? or are you hiding from the scars of you reality- staind
amazing write luke |
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Re: Fray
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by forever_lonely on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 07:02:38 PM AEST
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| p.s feel free to read a few of my writes, i really would like your input, if you do, particuarly read my latest post thanks and again amazing write luke |
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Re: Fray
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:07:33 AM AEST
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| Total frustration and anger. Wonderful write Moonlit. |
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Re: Fray
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:55:36 PM AEST
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| Very very interesting write. I think this was awesome and I do hope things get better. Take care will ya. |
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Re: Fray
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by karoody on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 05:19:34 PM AEST
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I doubt you remember me. but at any rate, it's good to see you here. your write is truely amazing! very powerful...rise like the phoenix...you deserve it...
take care
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