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Anger in my heart
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 11:43:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tiredness in my eyes
I blink of hate
staring into the nothingness I repeat
another day
Lashing out at anyone
I reach to strangle an angry state
Struggling in fog to
see a path to choose
I stand in the center unknowing
a direction to take
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-12-26 23:43:23]
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Re: Anger in my heart
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 09:29:16 AM AEST
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| I felt the anger indeed. |
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Re: Anger in my heart
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:49:38 AM AEST
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| i loved this poem. i havent had the chance to look at your other stuff, but this one reminds me a lot of my types of topics. keep it up |
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Re: Anger in my heart
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:14:39 PM AEST
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Sounds like me right now... short, but the point. Loved the second line very descriptive.
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Re: Anger in my heart
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 02:56:02 PM AEST
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| I love the conveyance of your anger in this one. Wonderful write Jenna. |
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Re: Anger in my heart
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 02:11:19 PM AEST
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Working down your list I find myself wanting to repeat all the things I've said before.
I like the way you write very much
bob |
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