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Fading out of me
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 11:35:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm drowning into you
your fading out of me
Im lost in your eyes
your wearing a disguise
I woke up today
Your gone tomrrow
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-12-26 23:35:42]
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Re: Fading out of me
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:53:51 AM AEST
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I'm glad the bad time is over.
Very well said.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Fading out of me
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:33:12 PM AEST
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glad you made it through and it is a short and to the point i love it
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Re: Fading out of me
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 03:02:47 PM AEST
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I hope you get this Jenn i love the counter rhythumn of this poem. And how beautifuly you tell of you repidode with the sadder side of love.
thank you also for your comment . . .
Ben |
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