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CAN'T SHAKE IT
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 07:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Had a dream the other night
You was there starring at me.
Yes, it was out of sight
Your love oh so free.
Didn't think you'd come around
after all was said and done.
All the love there we found.
You're still the caring one.
Can't shake it, baby
all the love we shared
Can't shake it, baby
The feeling is still there.
Can't shake it, baby
'cause our love is real
Can't shake it, baby
this love we both feel.
No matter which road we take
It leads me back to you.
Even after the sad mistakes
Just can't end up so blue.
Life keeps pointing the way
back to our dreams of reality.
What else can we say
This road says, follow me.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-12-26 19:49:42]
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Re: CAN'T SHAKE IT
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 08:49:56 PM AEST
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What a loving and smooth write Emmy. Really like this one alot
Many fine phrases such as the road says "Follow Me!"
lovely, Emmy
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Re: CAN'T SHAKE IT
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST
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sweetly written.. I liked this one alot emy
awesome write on loving someone I especially love the last line
Peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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Re: CAN'T SHAKE IT
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 01:38:22 AM AEST
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This is really lovely, grrlfriend... I really love it..
Hugs
Jenni..
P/S..I did have a great Christmas... ty |
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Re: CAN'T SHAKE IT
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by venkat on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 01:39:39 AM AEST
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| Haa.. its a lovely write. venkat |
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Re: CAN'T SHAKE IT
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 09:51:07 AM AEST
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| Really nice and very sweet indeed. |
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Re: CAN'T SHAKE IT
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:10:25 AM AEST
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| you have a way with words...good write.....sandy |
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