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- My Sinking Soul -

Contributed by Crimson_Rose on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 04:47:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



My soul, sinking into a river of sadness
Swirling around in the dark, cold water
Drowning in a pool of sins & despair
What happened to myself?
What led me to this harmful depression?

The harm rises, from my sinful cuts
Emitting from my wound like lost spirits
An evil laugh could be heard in the near distance
My dark, wandering soul will linger for all eternity,
In a terrifying torment of pain & suffering.

The eternal, black abyss that is my heart,
Yearns for someone to break it out of it's icy grave
Deep in the vile pits of my soul lies a bed of nails
My body lays upon those nails, crimson blood flows...
It spills onto the frosty ground seeping into the floor

My sinking soul has dove into a hole of terror & betray




Copyright © Crimson_Rose ... [ 2003-12-26 16:47:28]
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Re: - My Sinking Soul - (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 07:11:57 PM AEST
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Very interesting concepts!
Really deep.
peace, joy, luv,
emy
awesomely creative.


Re: - My Sinking Soul - (User Rating: 1 )
by Crimson_Rose on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 07:58:13 PM AEST
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THanks for the comment!!


Re: - My Sinking Soul - (User Rating: 1 )
by KellyA on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 10:17:44 PM AEST
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A little bit too dark and depressing for me, but not bad at all!


Re: - My Sinking Soul - (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 11:50:34 PM AEST
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this is sad but very beautiful .. I've felt this way myself about having no feelings and wanting someone to break me out of it.. this is a great expression of that .. I loved this poem

peace joy and hope
JENNA


Re: - My Sinking Soul - (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:11:41 PM AEST
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wow just when I think u've blown me away u post this. This is the kind of terrible, depressing, beauty that I love. If anyone says this isn't beautiful they must be on something. This was amazing.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: - My Sinking Soul - (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 12:55:43 PM AEST
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Well, they say words paint pictures.....
I think you just created a masterpiece

steve




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