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- A Stake In The Heart -
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 04:46:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the wallowing autumn blew past me,
The sadness broke out in me, escaping from its cage.
The maple leaves flew along the bleak sky.
Something inside me, clawing itself out,
It was my torn heart; it sprang from its dark prison.
A stake in the heart,
It bleeds eternally, dripping sorrow & despair.
My crimson blood stains the stone floor.
My solemn heart wants something or someone.
That one person, the one I’ve loved for so long.
In my deep, cerulean eyes, I see him
The one, who sends my heart to heaven,
My heart melting with love for him.
No one truly deserves to be alone
No one deserves to be treated like this
Not I.
A stake in the heart,
It forms a bloody hole
Out of it, seeps sadness
The stake, it drops to the ground
A loud thud echoes throughout the hall.
A black stake lies in a bed of blood.
My spirit has been broken,
Broke by the despair of loneliness.
What seems to be,
A stake in the heart.
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Crimson_Rose
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2003-12-26 16:46:50]
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Re: - A Stake In The Heart -
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by gem48 on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 08:21:32 PM AEST
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In general a good poem. I particually liked the repetition of 'A stake in the heart'- very effective.
Nicely written.
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Re: - A Stake In The Heart -
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 11:52:29 PM AEST
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this is so sad.. I really enjoyed this poem also.. I can relate to feeling this way myself.. I agree no one should feel so alone to die
great job
peace joy and hope
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Re: - A Stake In The Heart -
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:06:29 PM AEST
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wow how despairing. this was very beautiful, yet morbid. I'm not quite sure what to say since 'good job sista!' doesn't seem to cut it.
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