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I'm losing Hope
Contributed by
vinnie731
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Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 10:36:13 PM in AEST
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I’m losing hope
By vinnie 12/25/03
I’m losing hope, this year is almost over, still I haven’t proved myself, guilt lies within me, I can never be free, all I can do is hope, I have lost hope, I have sold my soul for freedom, Anger lies in the scares left on my body from being an out cast, I wonder if I will change or will I always be the same, I’ve tried to ignore the pain but it only brought more, I’ve done so much wrong, I’m still surprised that you still care, I’ve let myself down far to many times, I’ve hated my self for far to long, I want to give up so I don’t have to live in fear, my life is crazy and so am I, I haven’t lived life my life yet, I want to start over, I want to be happy as well as successful.
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Re: I'm losing Hope
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by ToriVeigh on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 12:34:32 AM AEST
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| You're the only person you have to prove anything to. You're also the only person that can change you. If that's really what you want, go for it. Just be careful you don't do it for someone else. Don't give up and I understand that's easier said than done. Great expression of frustration: keep writing. |
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Re: I'm losing Hope
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by harshreality on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 04:10:28 PM AEST
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You can be happy and successful, but if you ignore the pain it will always come back instead find a way to sort through it and put it behind you.
Always hope and believe in your dreams,
It helps you to cope with the trivial things! |
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Re: I'm losing Hope
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:13:52 AM AEST
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Hi Vinnie !!!
Mi piace molto il modo che hai espresso il tuo disperato sentimento di situazioni , cmque io penso che tutto e possibile nella vita basta volerlo.
Vinnie tu sei una persona molto forte , con sentimenti ver , aggessivi , disperati, potenti
Sono sicura che un giorno riuscirai a diventare a successful an happy man
much love to you !!!!
Lucia ( Italia)
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