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OPEN
Contributed by
LOST_KIDD
on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 07:59:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This must be stuck just my luck I’m trapped
Warped up in the moment of tomorrow
Today wont let me out of my sorrow
I can borrow the key in my dreams
Even while reality seems
Like a nightmare yesterdays don’t scare me
But this moment bores me OPEN UP
I want out of this place where fake is real
And love only cares about how it feels OPEN UP
How in the world did I get stuck here?
Fear of trust must have lead me
Sunk me deep in emotion am I trapped inside a castle
Or just lost in a ocean OPEN UP or let me breathe life again
Emotions got me trapped deep within me my fortress
Built in only a moment but these walls are more then cement
there built of time and commitment all my forgiveness
Copyright ©
LOST_KIDD
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2003-12-25 19:59:50]
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Re: OPEN
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 08:06:29 PM AEST
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Very good work of art.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: OPEN
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by ToriVeigh on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 11:48:48 PM AEST
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| When the world around me doesn't seem quite real or that I can't quite touch it, I know I'm in trouble. I find that's how I try to hide, by building a wall between myself and the rest of the world. I hope you find your way out. Continue writing; it may help you find the way. Good Luck! |
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