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weekend recap
Contributed by
merry
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Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 07:32:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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shielded by soft white
keeping everything at zero
for now it is over
everything flown out the window
fallen from the frozen trees
go and play in the sun
free yourself from me
watch you climb up and down
deliver the goods in a plastic bag
call you a visionary if i could talk
call him on the phone for a ride
because i can barely stand up
the cold night air steals my breath
like you stole my soul
just because you could
sitting next to him i die
a thousand deaths
gmm 6:57 PM 12/25/2003
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merry
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2003-12-25 19:32:17]
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Re: weekend recap
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 07:44:22 PM AEST
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Very mistical.
Good work.
peace, joy, luv,
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Re: weekend recap
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 07:46:14 PM AEST
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Damn, this one's gonna have me thinking for days. lol I love the way you write ;o)
Larry |
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