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minions
Contributed by
a_t0rtured_s0ul
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Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 03:56:19 AM in AEST
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In my head there are minions,
Fighting to absorb my opinions.
They attack without tire,
Deepening the intensity of the fire.
Increasing the bleakness,
Thriving on weakness.
Their goal,
To devour the soul.
To leave nothing but decay,
And disarray.
Their utterances,
Leave me in a trance.
They have become my friend,
At least they comprehend.
My thoughts,
When my nerves are drawn taut.
The minions in my mind,
Have tightened their bind.
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a_t0rtured_s0ul
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2003-12-25 03:56:19]
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Re: minions
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by mercedes on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 10:05:25 AM AEST
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good write
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Re: minions
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 10:48:22 PM AEST
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Increasing the bleakness,
Thriving on weakness
I liked those two lines had a nice ring to them this was a very good poem. I liked the emotion and tone of it.
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Re: minions
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by carebear on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:35:52 PM AEST
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hello
I agree with joel:)
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