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I Love It When You Dance With Me
Contributed by
Chanti
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Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 03:55:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love it when you dance with me,
touch my hand,
and hold me close,
It eases me of memories,
when i need to forget them the most,
It always helps me realize,
how much there is for me,
because there are times when i forget,
i forget so easily,
but then i look into your eyes,
and i see a whole life ahead,
rely on dreams built of hope,
and the sweet things youve said,
I love it when you dance with me,
it eases all the memories.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2003-12-25 03:55:21]
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Re: I Love It When You Dance With Me
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 06:05:01 PM AEST
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I really, really, liked your poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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Re: I Love It When You Dance With Me
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 10:40:05 PM AEST
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Different than the stuff u usually write, but change can be good although I must admit I didn't it like it as much as yer other stuff although it was still good. There wasn't as much emotion as in your other poems, the imagery was good though especially in the last 2 lines with the imagery of all the bad memories fading away. Keep on writing.
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