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dark
Contributed by
depresseddiva
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Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 03:33:34 AM in AEST
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Light is here for the shortest while, then the dark comes in and i begin to cry,
How i wish i were some where else not in this dark pit.
I wish my wings would grow so i could fly away
off to another day, a day of happiness, a day of acceptance
But how could that happen, the demon in side resists and i cant fight.
So i sit in this pit as the dark clouds float by and by.
When ask what is light, i say i know no light but dark i do if you look at me you will see it to .
You may not feel it but when you look in my eyes youll see i do
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Re: dark
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 05:15:11 PM AEST
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Hey, I told you you could write w/o having to rhyme..lol
Plus its good to finally see you've signed up here...its about time....
But anywho, I liked your write here, its good, speaking what you feel..perfect..
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Re: dark
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 11:13:31 PM AEST
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| EXCELLENT. |
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Re: dark
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:01:17 PM AEST
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Nice write...........keep looking for the light, it's out there somewhere !!
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