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Cycle of Sorrow
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 01:52:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Wipe the sorrow from my whispers
I'm catching myself again
I'm waiting for the difference
So that the difference can begin
A trouble that can't be named
Falls into paths that unwind
The way the cycle is spinning
And why you must be cruel to be kind
Losing is what sets us
Oh, the paths that could
It's not that you'd lose tomorrow
It's not that you would
Strong as the deepest sorrow
I'm wishing you to the breeze
I'd wait for you forever
As I'm waiting here on my knees
Scraped and torn from all the hurting
I'm hoping for dreams untamed
Sitting in the loss of a cycle
Waiting for sorrow to be named
Blocking all your memories
Played your pathetic pretending game
I pity you for your difference
And you hold me to the blame
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2003-12-25 01:52:16]
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Re: Cycle of Sorrow
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by CuttersAngel on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 02:01:13 AM AEST
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| Fantastic work.. I can relate to the last part of the poem. |
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Re: Cycle of Sorrow
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 10:30:04 PM AEST
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Wipe the sorrow from my whispers
That line as well as the rest of the poem was amazing. I loved this it struck me deep and I don't know why. Beautiful
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