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Today is the end
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 12:49:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The light is slowly fading
My body is cold to the touch
I am not afraid of what’s to come
Fighting this has just become too much
Go ahead and say I have given up
Given in, took the easy way out
Just remember I lived my life with a smile
When suffering seems to be what my life is about
Why should I look toward the future?
It will just be another today
I only wish to forget yesterday
And hope in the future tomorrow will stay
Very few with miss me
Let alone know I’m gone
I have only a handful of friends
And even those will soon move on
Go ahead tell me to stop
Plead with me to just go on
Only remember friends come and go
And tomorrow with my life I will be gone
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-12-25 00:49:19]
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Re: Today is the end
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 05:46:53 AM AEST
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I don't believe a word of this. I've read a dozen or more of this type since I joined a year ago.
I've sympathised. give helpful (well I thought so) advice and cheer only to find that it was all just monday morning blues or some such and the author is going to struggle on.
The poem was good and very well written. Far above the normal standard for this genre
Bye Bye
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Re: Today is the end
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by storm on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 10:14:33 AM AEST
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| IF THESE FEELINGS ARE REAL. WHY NOT TAKE A MOMENT ON THIS SPECIAL DAY AND VISIT A HOSPITAL CHILDRENS WARD OR HELP ROCK A SICK BABY? WHATS A LITTLE LONGER RIGHT. IF YOU ARE SO DETERMINED TO GIVE UP WHY NOT DONATE SOME TIME TO THOSE FIGHTING TO MAKE IT? |
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Re: Today is the end
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:54:37 AM AEST
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| Wow Christina. This is above the normal genre of the subject... I enjoyed this greatly. I don't really understand the other twos comments in ways but whatever. Lol. I liked it. |
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