|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
jealous
Contributed by
babe_alert_4eva
on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
hazel eyes warm brown hair
his inner beauty love so rare
his smile laugh hypnotic stare
i love him so it's just not fair
a dozen roses to her he'll send
anything broken 4 her he'll mend
he's been by her side through thick and thin
and what he feels for her comes from within
but then there was that 1 day
he left her just ran away
left her by herself forever more
just walked away and shut the door
but as the night ends, it also brings
two lovers together again
Copyright ©
babe_alert_4eva
... [
2003-12-24 21:46:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: jealous
(User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 11:32:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I did like this. Its lovely, sweet, and sad. |
|
|
Re: jealous
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 12:00:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I'm so sorry you have to be alone today
This was a very sad, and yet happy write.
With a nice ending inspite of all
You have talent....pursue it big and tall!
lovingcritters
ConSue |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
