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murder tastes like dark purple....
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:53:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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murder tastes like dark purple
with tiny broken veins of blue
it slides across your mental taste buds
and leaves you shivering with perverse delight
murder feels like a pointless scream
an introverted exclamation of hopelessness
a futile burning of sorrow's bile
that refuses to be swallowed again
murder is the most orgasmic revenge
for all the pain that you've endured
the just desserts for all those who've pained you
with their constant careless treatment
murder looks like a patient stalker
desiring you silently, ever waiting
for the fateful day when your eyes open
and you finally make the right choice
murder sounds so brutal
but it can be done with love
each laceration can sing with passion
each bullet hole, a testament to the love you once felt
murder feels like a long desired caress
to heal all that time could not
not erasing the scars, only justifying them
a passionate kiss from the lips of the forgotten
murder is not an act of desperation
more like an act of "god"
you become your chosen deity
as you snuff the weak flare
of your victim's petty existence
when whispered, it sounds like a seductive invitation
when shouted, a cry of soulful liberation
when said plainly, it holds the reassuring tone
of a long sought solution
murder is your victim's payment
for all the times that they cheated and lied
now alone, you feel so free
but the police will come to disturb your peace
which brings us to suicide.....
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Cancer
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2003-12-24 14:53:30]
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Re: murder tastes like dark purple....
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:58:46 PM AEST
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my favorite color....... :)
not erasing the scars....only justifying them........makes it sound so simple........i like this one..... |
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Re: murder tastes like dark purple....
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 12:45:19 AM AEST
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goodness I can't begin to say how much I love this... I was thinking of putting in a favourite line, but there's so many of them. This was simple, utter, brilliance I can't rant enough or say enough to justify your poem. Never put down yer pen.
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Re: murder tastes like dark purple....
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by Chanti on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 02:05:17 AM AEST
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Brilliant!
Makes me just want to... kill someone! You have amazing talent.. i agree with Joel, never put down your pen~ |
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Re: murder tastes like dark purple....
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 02:39:18 AM AEST
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| Whoa, I love the mental images accompanying this. The first two verses are as good as they come. Very thought-provoking . . . |
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