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The Night I Lost My Soul
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silent sound to start the night
Trembled hearts filled with fright
Razors in hand and ready to cut
To ease the pain of a broken trust
Blood us warm and ready to be spilled
All my feelings are being killed
Blood rushes to the surface in a bright red
I'm taken back to the life I fled
A calloused heart and a numbed mind
To hide the secrets I don't want you to find
My scars are reopend and outlined in pink
Too many times have I been on the edge's brink
Fifteen scars cover my skin
This may afterall be my greatest sin
For pleasure, for happiness, for hate and pain
For the one truest love I couldn't contain
Down on my knees I scream aloud
My scream breaks the silent night's sound
From Hell the demons start to come
To take my soul, my time is down
Willingly I go with them
Each of them holding me by a limb
In front of Diablo I now sit
There's no turning back, this is it
My finger is sliced and I begin to bleed
I sign over my soul promising not to leave
I'm no longer mortal, a demon I've become
To take my revenge and do what's to be done
I kill for him, for me, for hate
I now know this is my fate
Four years ago I took this vow
And love even more who I am now
Not once have I ever looked back
In a life that so much was lacked
For eternity my soul belongs to him
And nothing now will ever dim
For eternity will I remember that day
The day when he took my pain away
Forever will I remain by his side
And for an unknown reason hold the hightest pride.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
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2003-12-24 12:19:43]
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Re: The Night I Lost My Soul
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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deep. yet another one i loved, keep it up angel.
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Re: The Night I Lost My Soul
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by mercedes on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 04:50:57 PM AEST
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| Good write. I really liked the ending |
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Re: The Night I Lost My Soul
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 01:46:26 AM AEST
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wow I think this is my favourite of yours so far. This was really good. I like the emotion put into this very strong.
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Re: The Night I Lost My Soul
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 06:07:42 AM AEST
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Very well done, most definitely one of the darkest writes i've read in a while. Vivid descriptions further enhance the melancholic tone.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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