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Dripping Heart
Contributed by
carebear
on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 03:44:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Dribble…Dribble…
Spinning around
Fast like the wind of a storm
Falling on the floor
Shattering like a vase
Dripping heart
From the hurt of a lost love.
Dribble…Dribble…
Listen
Can’t you hear her cries?
Alone in a darkened room
On the floor is where she lies
Drenched in her own tears
She awaits the return of her lover
But in the darkest corner of her mind
She knows he is gone forever.
Time passes by so slowly
Her heart grows weary and weak
The more she cries
The faster her heart dies.
Dribble...Dribble...
Listen
Can't you hear the dripping of her broken and bleeding heart?
Heartache that hang's from above
Pain slowly stabbes her heart
Dripping blood all over.
Dribble...Dribble...
Winter cold air frezzes her
Body & soul ice
Words that were s'pose to said
No longer have the chance to get
Out, warmth of the sun settels her
At in harmony in her own heaven's
Of peace that lay her to rest.
© CareBear
Copyright ©
carebear
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2003-12-24 03:44:12]
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Re: Dripping Heart
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 03:50:18 AM AEST
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Alone in a darkened room
On the floor is where she lies
Drenched in her own tears
I loved those 3 lines an absolutely beautiful heart-wrenching poem. I hope to see more from you in the days and months to come. I like how u drew me into the poem and i loved the imagery.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Dripping Heart
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 04:17:26 AM AEST
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Well u certainly captured this suject well/
happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: Dripping Heart
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:59:35 PM AEST
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great write carebear. its hard to imagine someone calling themselves carebear writing something so dark and morbid. :)
(that was a joke). Keep it up. |
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Re: Dripping Heart
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:30:41 AM AEST
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| All 3 of you are very very morbid people.... I really like that lol. Welcome to the club. Lol. Joel is awesome and so is sensitivesoabused... Lol. Good work here. I liked it. |
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