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IMPERFECTION
Contributed by
a_t0rtured_s0ul
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Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:58:24 AM in AEST
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As I look in the mirror imperfection is all I see,
Beginning with me.
I probe deeper looking for something nice,
Finding nothing my heart turns to ice.
Everything touched wilts-feeling like a total failure,
Bad times and pain the only thing pure.
Allowed to love but it's never to be returned,
Everything I do and feel leaves me burned.
It's been said - Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned,
Well what about Heaven hath no sadness like a woman's heart torn.
As I look at the world imperfection all I see,
Society getting colder toward people like me.
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Re: IMPERFECTION
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 03:09:21 AM AEST
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Hey there,
I do my bestest to stay away from society.
I am what I am by the grace of God that he let me enjoy, for a time great parents.
Very good writing but to me u r gold as u write such good poems.
happy holidays,
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Re: IMPERFECTION
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by CuttersAngel on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 04:24:38 PM AEST
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| Great poem!!! Society is a ***** aint it?! All well, who cares about those self centered,I"m better than you, people anyway. They'll never understand. |
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Re: IMPERFECTION
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:24:28 AM AEST
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| Your feelings are so similar to mine. |
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