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I cant live without it
Contributed by
mercedes
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Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You said you would always be there for me
You said you had a shoulder to lend
You said no matter what, friends we would be
Until the very end
Has the end arrived so very soon?
Or did you just chose to lie to me?
Why did you run when I finally felt safe
Safe enough to open up to you?
Is my life so bad even you cant stand it?
Do you think I’m making up the pain I feel?
Just learn to relax and let go like you
If only I could
Fine, leave, see if I care
I don’t need you anyway
I have my life to live or take
Whichever I so chose
You were never a true friend
You were a phantom of my imagination
You were there only when it suited you
My life did not matter
Seems you taught me a lesson after all
When I finally turned my anger towards you
I realized my life may mean nothing to you
But I cant live without it
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-12-24 02:05:22]
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Re: I cant live without it
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:10:19 AM AEST
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the end of a friendship is hard to go through but through your words I can see your conviction and strength. People come and go you will find the ones who are true and they will continue with you on your journey steadfast and true. Great write.
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Re: I cant live without it
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:16:55 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing!
We all fall short at times.
happy holidays-n-huggs,
emy |
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Re: I cant live without it
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:35:47 AM AEST
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| very good. i loved it. it fits in very well with my writing topic and style. keep it up. |
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Re: I cant live without it
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:28:33 AM AEST
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| Whoa... Whom was that directed towards. Pretty harsh but incredibly well expressed. I dunno what to make of this one though I liked it. |
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