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I AM ALONE
Contributed by
fudge
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Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 01:52:17 AM in AEST
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there are people around me
yet i am so alone
my body is so tired
yet i feel dead already
i don't know what pushes me on
but i know what's holding me back.
i want to sleep in tomorrow
yet i'm afraid of my dreams.
inside i am crying for help
yet my face only smiles.
i pretend i don't care
yet my heart breaks at the drop of a hat.
i am a fake, a liar, i am an act
in hope that i will fool myself into thinking i'm fine.
it's like being beaten that many times
that i become numb and desensitised.
and i give up because it won't stop
no matter how hard i try.
it's not the end of the world, i know,
and no one said life was meant to be easy,
don't lecture me on all of this.
you will never understand
much like i will never undestand you
and the pain you have felt yourself.
but we are all human, we all feel love and hurt.
so let's join together for support,
and help me fool myself into thinking it's okay.
there are people around me,
yet i am so alone.
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fudge
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2003-12-24 01:52:17]
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Re: I AM ALONE
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by mercedes on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:07:19 AM AEST
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| This is a good write. I feel this way often myself. Hope the venting helped you some. |
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Re: I AM ALONE
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:20:52 AM AEST
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Im sending you a hug and even though you feel alone know that your not. Im at a distance but your never alone. I understand these feelings and I also understand sometimes there is little comfort that can come from anothers words. Great expressions and honesty,
michelle |
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Re: I AM ALONE
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:24:43 AM AEST
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I know the feeling.
U captured the subject well!
happy holidays-n-better times,
emy |
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Re: I AM ALONE
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by HiddenAlmaresare on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 11:54:04 AM AEST
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WOW, that's an amazing poem/"vent" I understand and feel that way completely. It's like you are in my mind. People who can write that way without even thinking, are people with amazing talent. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
-Almaresare |
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Re: I AM ALONE
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:55:01 PM AEST
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wow well I can definitely understand where u are writing from. The "i'm afraid of my dreams" line really hit me. This was great sometimes just venting creates the best poems.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I AM ALONE
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by hope on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:07:02 AM AEST
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Wow...so so true, we can be surrounded by so many people but feel so empty. Very real...understood completely. Their is so much pain behind our smiles. I really enjoy your writes.
PS. Thanks for the comment |
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