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I'm not right
Contributed by
TheVarsh
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Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:31:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I think of myself as perfect
Why then do I snap
Why do I get mad at
Little things that my
Most cherished person has
No control over
I speak sternly
And she sits and stares
She's crying on the inside
But her pride is too much
To show that she is in pain
So she takes my attacks
And buffers them with love
She could leave
And go be a princess if she chose
But she stays
And takes my crap
I don't deserve her
I'm not right for her
I'm not right for myself
I'm not right...
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Re: I'm not right
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:42:50 AM AEST
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Hmmm.. you seem very hard on yourself..but you write well....
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Re: I'm not right
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 01:21:27 AM AEST
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Knowing is half the battle, so they say.
Very good analogy of oneself.
good work.
peace, joy, luv, happy hollidays,
emy |
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Re: I'm not right
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:31:13 AM AEST
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I relate to this not being hard on yourself will be the hardest thing to overcome.
Merry Christmas
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Re: I'm not right
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by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:05:09 PM AEST
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your sweet will never leave you hurt and crying..your sweet will never give up on you....
she loves you and wants to b with you...
the rest can be overcome. blessed be. |
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Re: I'm not right
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 01:58:46 PM AEST
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Now now now...you can't talk yourself out of this one as easily as that.
A very good write but it needs a couple more verses.You have much more to do don't you?
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