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Foolishness
Contributed by
TheVarsh
on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:23:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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FOOLISHNESS!
Spurning the ones who care
With words like
I'm fine
It's nothing
There's nothing wrong
When you know that
Deep inside you the voices
Scream for release
But you keep it in
For fear of angering those you love
Why are you angry
What have they done that
Is so destructive
NOTHING!
You sit in silence as their
Words of love wash over you
What do you gain
Other than an ache in your heart
And a feeling of
"I should have done this"
It's so foolish of me
FOOLISHNESS!
I hope you can forgive me...
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TheVarsh
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2003-12-24 00:23:48]
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Re: Foolishness
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:35:58 AM AEST
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I don't think you're an idiot.... this was a fine piece of work..good show of feelings..
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Re: Foolishness
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:36:57 AM AEST
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this is sad but i can understand it.. i've felt this way before myself.. very well expressed
great job
Peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Foolishness
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:35:43 AM AEST
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I agree with Jen your not an idiot..........I say ba hum bug on that!! Some situations are hard specially when it comes toloved ones and being painfully honest about your feelings.
Michelle |
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Re: Foolishness
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by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:02:48 PM AEST
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| you are far from being an idiot....just open up to love and see your troubles vanish in the light that love creates....talk to her...she will understand. blessed be. |
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