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The Cost on the Cross
Contributed by
rhymestein
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:49:38 PM in AEST
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In the beginning we were just dust,
Then God took his hands and created us.
In later years, and laden in sin,
It turned to tears as we turned on him.
Thorns going down into His head,
While hanging there He bled.
Blood drips down his face,
For one way our sin could erase.
His head went down and bled,
"It was finished" was the words he said.
Many people mourned and cried.
For today on the cross He died.
They remember back for so long,
Knowing He never did any wrong.
Remembering the day He broke the bread.
To a multitude He then soon fed.
But then He rose again on the third day,
Now we have Jesus to watch and pray.
To accept the bread of life,
Instead of Hell and eternal strife.
That day He broke more bread then ever before.
For all man kind He opened the door.
The price for all the lost,
He paid the final Cost on the Cross.
In the beginning we were just dust,
Then God gave his Son to die for us.
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Re: The Cost on the Cross
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:41:20 AM AEST
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Awesome masterpeice!
peace, joy, luv, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: The Cost on the Cross
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:21:16 AM AEST
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I thought this was great... I liked the rhyme scheme and how this was written in a non-judgmental way. Very beautiful.
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Re: The Cost on the Cross
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:37:50 AM AEST
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I dont consider myself a religous person at all but this is beautiful and so very truthful,enjoyable read and tis the season for it, Jesus birthday.
Merry Christmas
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Re: The Cost on the Cross
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:10:21 PM AEST
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| this is a wonderful poem and a glory to the Lord! Keep writing for HIm! It is very moving, and draws you into the pain and separation of the crucifiction! Well done and God bless you! |
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