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At last the devil I have found
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:58:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It starts with a look, a glance
A tilt of the head, a smile on your lips
A small wink of your eye
As you walk nearer, I let out a sigh
My breath catches in my throat
My chest feels at once constricted
My heart is pounding hard and fast
Maybe tonight I’ll get lucky at last
Unconsciously I slid my hands down my body
Imagining your hands there instead
At once the room becomes too hot
A cold drink would surely hit the spot
In front of me now, you stand
You lips move as you talk to me
I can only nod in agreement and hope that’s okay
As I am deaf to all you say
You take my hand and lead me away
Anywhere you go, I am sure to follow
I lost the ability to stand on my own two feet
Evil has never tasted so darn sweet
Hand in hand we walk
To the end of the world we go
To you I am forever bound
At last the devil I have found
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mercedes
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2003-12-23 22:58:31]
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Re: At last the devil I have found
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:11:22 PM AEST
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I hear ya. I've run across him a time or two myself.
Great work. Very creative.
peace, joy, luv, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: At last the devil I have found
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:43:37 PM AEST
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ahh temptation...so sweet is the taste of it....well done.
THE WIND..... |
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Re: At last the devil I have found
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:39:04 PM AEST
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ahh this was great I loved the imagery and the comparison to sin/satan. Great poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: At last the devil I have found
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:17:25 AM AEST
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| Heh. I liked this the first time and still like it... I wish I where that charming... Lol. |
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