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hap-hazardly..
Contributed by
Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:47:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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spirit!--come!--do you not hear their plea?!
lay your burdens on my soul
bring forth your lies
i am salvation to all the world's hell
i alone, hold the power to make thee well
untouched by angels for questioning sin
---they all hide inside me---
a release, an answer
answers to MY sufferings, MY hurt...
no longer shall i bleed!
never again to need sweet pain
lavishing blood to hide my tears
the pain to hide the pain!
Copyright ©
Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre
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2003-12-23 22:47:33]
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Re: hap-hazardly..
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:05:45 PM AEST
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Very deep!
Good work.
peace, joy, luv, happy holidays,
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Re: hap-hazardly..
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:47:08 AM AEST
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great work I must agree the word deep explains my feelings as well.
Merry Christmas
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Re: hap-hazardly..
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:40:33 PM AEST
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bring forth your lies
I loved that line really struck me for some reason.
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Re: hap-hazardly..
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:16:03 AM AEST
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| Deep and deeply awesome. Good write. I enjoyed this very much. |
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