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lost
Contributed by
Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:36:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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if i become lost in darkness,
would you search the heavens for my soul
when my laughter you so strain to hear
would be no more.
if i become lost in darkness,
who would care
when my spirit is silent and my heart is stopped
who would be there
when the angels reject me
and i am chained to flames,
would you sacrifice to save me..
from this what would you gain
when i become lost in darkness
would you search the heavens for my soul..
if i become lost in darkness
then where would my love go
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2003-12-23 22:36:39]
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Re: lost
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:48:21 PM AEST
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Good writing!
peace, joy, luv, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: lost
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by TheVarsh on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:15:11 AM AEST
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| Very nice. I like the way you write. I should've looked sooner......... |
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Re: lost
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:50:46 PM AEST
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I thought this was beautiful, yet dark at the some time a truly great write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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