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my child
Contributed by
Candi
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:56:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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dry your eyes my child
tommorow's another day
the pain will stop soon
nevermind the confusion
and torture you go through
hold it all in
no one will understand
hold it back
until your heart explodes
from the pain
and your head throbs
from the agonizing memories
hold it in my child
until your body bleeds your emotions
and dries up
to dust
and blows away
then you are to be nevermore
dry your eyes my child
tommorrow's anther day
it can only get worse
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Candi
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2003-12-23 21:56:56]
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Re: my child
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 12:40:31 AM AEST
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Beautiful...I love how you wrote this...
These lines are so postive...
"dry your eyes my child
tommorrows anther day
it can only get worse"
Jenni
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Re: my child
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:48:54 AM AEST
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flowing words here that reach out to me
Merry Christmas
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