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hold on
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i dont want to let go of
this feeling
its tearing me apart now
and for the longest time love
filled my empty life
while my pride and fear
drove you away from me
i was comfortable in that
line between the shadow
that is my disguise and the
light that are your eyes (the ones
that might see me one day)
even now im clinging to the edge
but your silence proves
that i was living through a lie.
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fallensilence
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2003-12-23 18:58:28]
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Re: hold on
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by mercedes on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:14:32 PM AEST
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| This is a good write though it is very sad. Hope it all works out for you |
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Re: hold on
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 09:50:56 AM AEST
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strikes a chord with me. raw, brutally honesty and with a sense of yearning for something that i can't put my finger on.
i've missed your words, love Kate x |
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