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Good-bye
Contributed by
jme
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:20:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm standing here on my own two feet
Shedding sorrow and defeat
The pains subsided, the tears have dried
Replaced with confidence, will, and pride
I'm letting you go, I'm setting you free
I refuse to give you anymore of me
Good-bye, my past
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2003-12-23 10:20:02]
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Re: Good-bye
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by CuttersAngel on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:44:34 AM AEST
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| If you only knew how well I relate to this poem. |
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Re: Good-bye
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by Eve on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:44:12 PM AEST
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It takes a lot to wave farewell to your past; I myself can't manage to do so, so I know that it's hard. Great write of something I could never do. Kudos to you that you could.
Keep writing,
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Re: Good-bye
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:00:28 PM AEST
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| Hard to let go the past is sometimes. I really enjoyed this. I know these feelings all too well. |
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Re: Good-bye
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by Estelle_Toh on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:49:19 PM AEST
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Very much to the point with so few words!
Great Write! :)
Estelle |
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